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mike’s point of view

Everyone even charlie came running in asking which room Nat was in and the nurse lead them to where the two of us were but johnny was late. Nat’s so small comared to me so my jacket was like a big shirt on her since she’s like 4’10 and i’m 6’1. she wasn’t awake yet but the docter wanted to wait till everyone was there not suprising johnny was late. I worried about Nat since she’s never been this way. When Johnny got into the hospital room the doctor explained that Natalie had an anxiety attack. we all looked at him shocked. Paige stuttered “wa wait anxiety attack?” the doctor nodded and said “wait you all didn’t know this?” we all shook our heads and the doctor left us to talk among ourselves. Briggs was the first to speak out of all of us “Paige who is this girl you brought with you?”  Paige stuttered “th this is Tia she’s the one i’ve been helping out but lets figure out how we can help nat now.” Paige handed me my hoodie and I put it on Nat even though it was very big on her. Nat was in a very deep sleep mode I just wish she would wake up.  Johnny placed a giant stuffed dolphin next to Nat and smiled at her. I whispered in her ears “Nat please wake up we are your family now and we care so much about you even though graceland isn’t exaclly safe we will keep you safe.

Nat’s point of view
I wasn’t on the floor anymore but on a bed I wonder where. I heard a voice “Natalie ca can you hear me? I saw a figure who looked like my older brother drew. the figure spoke “Nat please dont do this to yourself I know its been hard on you since I was killed and Hack ran away but your friends are worried about you.” I stuttered “D… Drew what should I do I’m really scared though that they will kick me out after all the mess i’ve caused.” Drew spoke “Nat they won’t kick you out even though you’ve made a mess of things no offence but they are your family now and they will support you.” I spoke “Drew they didn’t know about my anxiety until now.” Drew said in a stern but loving voice “Nat please don’t hurt yourself they worry about you a lot even though you have your issues we all have issues just some don’t show.” I smiled a little “thank you drew.” He smiled back and whispered “I love you sis and I’ll always be with you even if you can’t see me.”
Paige’s point of view
I was writing down notes about Tia’s sister and where she is when my phone started ringing. I answered it “hello?” I heard mike’s frantic voice trying not to be so loud “Paige get over to the hospital imdeitly its important.” I stuttered “mike i’m in the middle of a case can’t i come later?” he said in a louder voice “no its Nat please hurry and bring one of my hoddies.” I quickly explained to Tia that I needed to go she said “if you’re going i’m going with you” I looked at her with my confused face “really even though you don’t know her.” she nodded and I quickly ran to the house grabbing mike’s hoddie wondering why he needed it. I also grabbed the journals i was going to give nat. We ran slowly to the hospital.


Johnny’s point of view
I was at the store trying to find food for dinner that night since it was my turn to cook and charlie volantered to go with me when my phone started buzzing like nuts. I answered “hello?” mike’s voice was very frantic when he spoke “Johnny i’m at the hospital with nat somethings wrong with her please hurry.” I said in my loud voice “i’m on my way mikey.” I quickly grabbed a giant stuffed dolphin and said “flipper is going to love this.” I gave Nat the nickname a few days ago when I realized she loves the water. She’s like my little sis even though she is uptight a lot she is very caring and has a good laugh.


Brigg’s point of view
I was working on my mediation when my phone started ringing. I growled at it and answered in my angry voice i use when people disturb me. “Hello?!!” Mike’s voice sounded frantic not like the normal frantic when he’s on a case. “Briggs get down to the hospital and hurry nat’s not moving and hasn’t opened her eyes yet.” I took a deep breath and said “I’m on my way mike just stay calm and let everyone else know.” I grabbed my budda beads I have a spare set but Nat liked this set of them I thought it would be nice to give to her.

Charlie’s point of view
Johnny and I went shopping but he and I went our sepriate ways. I saw a fedora that looked perfect for Nat. I bought it in a hearbeat when Johnny came running towards me “Charlie lets go we got to get to the hospital asap.”  I shouted kind of loud “whats wrong johnny?” “Nat is in the hospital lets go.” I ran out with johnny and we rode to the hosptial.

DJ’s point of view
I was out looking around at all the shops. I don’t get out much other then when i’m on a case. I think something is wrong with nat I can feel it. My phone started buzzing like crazy. I answered “hello?” “DJ get to the hosptal soon something’s wrong with nat.” mike screamed in my ear “calm down mike i’ll be there soon.” I found some pretty lilies wraped up in sets of 12 and i bought some for nat.
chapter 3.5 Nat?
this chapter was hard to write I almost broke down in tears 
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college life so far

Journal Entry: Sun Sep 14, 2014, 3:40 PM


hard to believe I'm in college. Been feeling under the weather these past few days and homesick but other then that its been going good. it just feels so weird not seeing my old hs classmates here since most of us have been in the same school since middle school.

  • Mood: Sadness
  • Listening to: love never fails brandon heath
  • Reading: les miserables

college life so far

Journal Entry: Sun Sep 14, 2014, 3:40 PM


hard to believe I'm in college. Been feeling under the weather these past few days and homesick but other then that its been going good. it just feels so weird not seeing my old hs classmates here since most of us have been in the same school since middle school.

  • Mood: Sadness
  • Listening to: love never fails brandon heath
  • Reading: les miserables
Nat's point of view
The next morning after our bonfire I told Briggs who’s like a father to me since he’s over protective and everyone else I’m visiting my brother. Mike volantered to go with me but I told him I want to do this on my own please. they all nodded and looked up cases as I left. I knocked on Hack’s door and took a deep breath. He opened the door and pulled me in for a hug “its so good to see you sis.” I giggled “good to see you too little bro.” Even though Hack is wayy taller then me he’s acutully younger than me.  I took a deep breath as I walked in I asked him“hack?” He looked down at me and spoke “hm?” I looked nervously in his eyes and stuttered to get my words out “ha hack how can I tell them about my anxiety i’m nervous that I’ll have an attack when no one is home.” He looked at me stright in the eyes “Natalie listen to me you need to tell them before you hurt yourself.” I nodded and hugged him “you’re right hack i’m heading back to the house now but I’ll see you soon.” As I got back to the house I saw everyone was gone so I curled up in a ball in my room realising I don’t have any more meds for my anxiety which isn’t good. I pulled off my fedora and read a poem my two brothers wrote i’ve kept it in my hat ever since they gave it to me. a natalie is a strong brave girl. she isn’t afraid to stick up for herself. she is the best sister we could have. Don’t be afraid to ask for help little sis even when you don’t think you need it. Don’t give up and we will always be with you even if you can’t see us. Please don’t let your past take over your mind. I started having chest pains and feeling real dizzy. I slowly closed my eyes but suddenly blacked out.

mike’s point of view
The next morning Nat had explained to us that she is visiting her brother. I volantered to go with her but she didn’t want me to. I shrugged and went to get into my wetsuit. Johnny, Briggs and I went surfing for a while but after words they had to go out with Dale and paige went out but who knows where Charlie is. I went out to go for my morning jog hoping Nat would be alright with her brother. She doesn’t know my feelings for her yet which is good since I don’t want to cause her more pain then she’s already had with losing her other brother, being raped and almost being raped again. When I got back into the house I thought no one was in the house I saw someone’s hand near Nat’s door. When I opened it I saw Nat on the floor not moving. I started panicing but trying not to freak out I chose to carry her there myself but first I called everyone else and told them to meet me at the hospital.

college life so far

Journal Entry: Sun Sep 14, 2014, 3:40 PM


hard to believe I'm in college. Been feeling under the weather these past few days and homesick but other then that its been going good. it just feels so weird not seeing my old hs classmates here since most of us have been in the same school since middle school.

  • Mood: Sadness
  • Listening to: love never fails brandon heath
  • Reading: les miserables

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